The number of crimes committed by adolescents is currently rising at an alarming rate. This essay will discuss the underlying causes of the problem, possible measures to tackle it and appropriate penalties to apply on young offenders.
To begin, I think there are two main contributors to the worsening of juvenile delinquency. For one, excessive usage of the internet among teenagers has apparently exposed them to harmful online materials such as violent video games and pornography. It is believed that these contents have a toxic effect on immature minds, provoking victims to commit assaults or sex crimes. However, the fundamental cause of juvenile offenses is the lack of parental care. Many parents fail to recognize their children’s emotional struggles in their adolescence, which include prolonged suffering from being bullied or pressured to achieve academically. Tragic events such as teenagers shooting at schools in America would probably not have happened had these youngsters, in their most vulnerable state of mind, received timely support from their parents or responsible guardians.
In order to prevent this trend from escalating further, besides imposing stricter censorship on online media, governments should require every parent to take parenting courses. For the most part in many countries, people are still relying on traditional family practices without incorporating advanced, scientific parenting methods into child-raising. Therefore, obligatory parenthood mentoring programs would equip parents with essential knowledge and skills to provide sufficient mental assistance to their children.
Although lowering the age of criminal responsibility or making use of imprisonment might help to deter juvenile crimes, I believe taking educational approaches would be more beneficial to the society in the long run. For example, teenagers committing minor offenses could be sentenced to community service, while drug addicts should be sent to behavioral training programmes. Unless severe crimes such as intentional murder are committed, it is humane to help youngsters correct their mistakes and do good to the community.
In conclusion, while governments need more scrutinization on online information, parental guidance remains primary in protecting teenagers from outside influences. Parenting courses are essential, and educational punishment should be utilized to give young offenders chances to become happy and productive citizens.
- More and more companies are allowing their employees to work from home rather than going to office each day Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 84
- Nowadays the crime rate is increasing especially among teenagers what are the reasons behind it How can be reverse their trend what punishment methods should be in your opinion 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2120.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9217877095 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04555366845 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684357541899 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1526384563 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157099058673 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449479656961 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040191904353 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803779259366 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033661435403 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.35 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.48 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 153.0 78.4519038076 195% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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