Nowadays, families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this. Explain the reason for this and discuss any possible effects it may have no society.
In recent years,the closeness between the families have reduced as compared with the last decades.This is because of so many reason.In the below essay will discuss the reason for this and what are the effects of this on the society.
Firstly,due to advance technology people have become more socialist.Nowaday,people spend a lot of time on social websites,such as facebook,instagram,whats app and so on.Due to this reason the bond between the family got weaker..Furthermore,people spend a lot of time at work and don't get quality time to spend with their family.Due to hectic work schedule most people spend a lot of time at their workplace and don't get time to know what is happening in his family.Moreover,people go abroad for work and studies which can build a distance from their family for so many years.If someone is working in abroad than he can't interact which his family ,which can affect their bond with the family.Most parents send their children abroad for higher studies which can create a distance between them.
There are so many effects of this on the community. At first,if people are spending a lot of time on social media than it can affect their health and can also involve them in some suspicious activity.secondly,if people are spending more time at work than it can create a conflict in the family which can lead to a divorce.Thirdly,if children are sent abroad for studies alone than there is a high chance of getting involved in some bad habits such as taking drugs,because on one is their to pay attention on them.
In conclusion,due to social media and hectic work schedule people have increased their gap with their family,which indirectly have the effect on the society such as children are getting addicted to drugs and lot of separation are happening .community have to take corrective measures to decrease this gap.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1067961165 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49050392968 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449838187702 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 249.161313209 49.4020404114 504% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 315.6 106.682146367 296% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.8 20.7667163134 298% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.8 7.06120827912 309% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236550663656 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174858415763 0.084324248473 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885923417083 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18798841157 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880362161281 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.5 13.0946893788 256% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.56 50.2224549098 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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