Nowadays, families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this.
Explain the reasons for this and discuss any possible effects it may have on society.
Family plays a vital role in someone's development in terms of values, knowledge about culture, tradition and so on, but people's mindset has been changed with respect to time, where people prefer to give less importance to family than the past. Thus, I am going to highlight the reasons and consequences of this development.
To begin with, people have become deeply obsessed with their life affairs wherein they have even forgotten the importance of the family owing to multifarious reasons. First, people have engrossed themselves utterly in the overuse of technology, wherein people have got various platforms where they like to interact with friends and other people, rather than discussing with family members. On top of that, people's preference for materialistic things such as luxurious items, gadgets have made them work relentlessly for fulfilling such lofty desires, which in turn has brought hectic life for them, thus a major cause of the rift between them and family.
On the other side, the family is an inevitable part of someone's life, no one can get success without the contribution of family, and therefore negligence of family may bring myriad negative effects in society. Firstly, people can get knowledge of few domains from books and the internet, but knowledge about respect, dignity and many more, can only be furnished by family, and these things play a significant role in someone's holistic development. In addition, if one will not give importance to the family then it is quite difficult for someone to survive and earn recognition in the society. For instance, it has been found that a good relationship with family members can be one of the main cures for many psychological disorders such as anxiety disorder and chronic stress disorder.
In conclusion, I opine that a tree cannot survive without roots, which is similar to people in the case of family. Thus, one should never forget to give respect to the family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can get success without the contribution family, and therefore negligence of fami...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, with respect to, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18037974684 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68651875697 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582278481013 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.3886700161 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.818181818 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7272727273 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246638874273 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869524613868 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053145060011 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124526415055 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694538991568 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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