Nowadays families move to different countries for work. Some people think it has a negative effect on children, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
These days, it can be observed that many families across the globe are shifting to abroad for the purpose of work. According to some this phenomenon has a bad impact on the children while others hold the opposite view. In my opinion, I think that migration to other countries would be beneficial for the growing generation in many ways.
On the one hand, some people believe that bringing children to other countries would have some deleterious effect as it might hinder the natural way of upbringing them. To illustrate, in order to grow up properly, they need a known environment where abundant of love, affection and proper take care is available that they can get not only by their parents but also by other members of the family. As they would be far away from them, they could be deprived of those essential materials which are crucial for their mental growth. Furthermore, it might be unpleasant for the little children to adjust to a new environment where they find themselves as nobody. Consequently, the children might become introverted.
On the other hand, according to others, children of a migrated family can be benefited in many ways and I agree. In other words, from the beginning of the life, the children would confront challenges in several ways such as making new friends and adjusting to other cultures. By overcoming these problems, they might have gained confidence and Independence which certainly help them in future when they enter in their adulthood. Moreover, the children who stayed abroad with their parents get the chance to learn more than one language that obviously a beneficial career aspect in this competitive era.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I think that living abroad with parents would bring many advantages to the children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01666666667 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64998742135 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553333333333 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4420836528 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.769230769 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213425829383 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861669863719 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629799357821 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150508360973 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611746050846 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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