It is often observed that food is the basic need of human and in developed as well as developing countries people now have more inclination towards processed food. This is an arguable view that if canned food is helping in time-saving strategy or we are compromising our health for the sake of easiness from cooking food. In this essay, we will discuss both views regarding what are the perks and disadvantages.
To begin with, packaged ready-made food provide an extended convenience to save time in this fast-paced life. Not only this, with a large number of working families, spending time together is a vital need. In fact, an empirical survey from Oxford University ascertains that by the use of processed ingredients around sixty-five percent of preparation time could be saved. Certainly, that is an indication of the work-life balance strategy. Secondly, the number of vast varieties are available in the market and people can taste continental food at their home without the hassle and worry about the recipes.
Although, time-saving is one perk in this case, however, it is inevitable that the impact of intaking delicacies on our health surging the chances of chronical diseases. The supermarket, provide ready-made food rich in fat and sugar, that ultimately lead to the situation of heart attack or obesity. Nonetheless, packaged food items are much expensive than normal ingredients, and in term of quantity, it is less. For instance, in a piece of recent news by "The Times", there are various healthy alternates of ready-made food that are light on pockets, also can be prepared in minutes. Admittedly, health is wealth, and our diet is a key source of vitality.
To conclude, there are ample pieces of evidence that reduction in time invested in food preparation can provide social benefits but on the cost of our health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nonetheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in fact, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11184210526 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87480428094 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601973684211 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0992259817 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110242199733 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376045206347 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255834726769 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675631632752 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318143700371 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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