Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to bring your attention towards a local library named "Ilm-a-Nush", which is being considered as a historical monument. The historical value of this edifice is unmatched, as it was the first library in India which was built by Akbar to study the Indian culture.
Although, the building is quite old, and no renovation work is done from the past few decades, but its pillars are still quite strong. Moreover, many enthusiastic readers visit it on a daily base, because it is the only library in our vicinity. However, the outer architecture of the building is made of stones, but the interior structure of it is now fragile. The fissures on wall and roof are apparent and widen, the paint and cement now dry and gritty as well, which is often found on books and study desks. Hence, I believe this heritage is in a devastating condition.
To avoid any catastrophic situation in future, the authority has to take some action plan now. I request you to please start the renovation and maintenance work as soon as possible, you can also ask locals for help and volunteer for this humble purpose by providing them the knowledge about the historical and current significance of this place.
Your Faithfully,
ABC
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 37, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... To avoid any catastrophic situation in future, the authority has to take some action ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93925233645 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96120503524 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635514018692 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2200135089 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.7 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 4.34317383033 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170503382232 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583240530249 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526422728483 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901519218213 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343982881903 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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