Nowadays, food travels thousands of miles before reaching consumers. It affects the agriculture and economy of the destination country, and for this reason, people should prefer food produced by local farmers.
Do you agree or disagree?
I think that people can undoubtedly help agriculture in their counties by purchasing food grown by local farmers. If they prefer locally produces food items over imported food products, individuals who cultivate different crops would benefit more. Therefore, state agriculture would expand significantly and food would be available to almost everyone in a particular country at an affordable price. For example, people in many parts of India only consume food produced on their own lands and this is the key reason why the growth of agriculture in India is booming these days.
Moreover, the national economy would boost if maximum numbers of people consume only local food products. The more people would spend on food products of their region, the more money would go to the national government and ultimately country’s economy would grow as the money spent on local food will remain in the particular country. In 2017, for instance, the Indian economy raised by 5% due to increased consumption of local food by Indians.
In conclusion, I altogether support the idea that the farming business and economy of the individual nation would grow drastically if greater numbers of people from that country consume majorly food products cultivated by local farmers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28217821782 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70598334223 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579207920792 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.4189677654 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.375 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314629394907 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157221573321 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031718851667 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222579869222 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05336312312 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.