Nowadays the football supporters behave violently. What is the cause? How can we solve it?
In modern era, the issue of football hooliganism has became highly controversial. This has became serious and detrimental problem for our society. In this essay, I will discuss cause of this problem and offer some measures to tackle this issue.
Generally speaking, there are two main reasons why people are backing up to their football team with brutal emotions. It is well-know fact that competitive emotions in football match result in violence. For example, if anyone who are supporting of team have strong emotional ties up with their team, they can show brutal behavior to the other supporter who are supporting winning team due to loss of the match. Another cause of this violence is the excessive consumption of alcohol in the contest. The results of this is that people getting drunk, which in turn leads to fighting with each other.
Despite these challenges, there is numbers of way to resolve this issue. The main way to combat this issue is by making some regulations in the stadium. For example, If authorities make some restriction such as entry with alcohol, people can not getting drunk and no not fighting. Secondly,introducing some strong punishment can affect the person's behavior during the match. If people know this penalty, they can not acting violently due to for fear of be sent to prison.
In conclusion, hooliganism in sport branches especially in football is topic which very relevant to modern society. However I believe that the best way to solve this problem is by making some legislation and informing to the people. If governments implement this policy, it will provide better sport contests.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06691449814 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76571431296 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546468401487 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7423655224 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1875 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113720720063 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357768253751 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283706217831 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665628877418 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264013685787 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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