Nowadays, full-time university student tend to focus on their studying. Some people think it is essential for university students to be involved in other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is undeniable that studying at university is a process which requires a serious concentration of student's efforts on lectures. Meanwhile, there is an opinion that students should also take part in some other activities. Personally, I totally agree that it is essential for students to combine academic lessons and social activities.
To begin with, studying hard plays a paramount role in university time; however, many bookworm pay too much attention to their learning without awareness of its demerits. Actually, they can face with both mental health and physical health which can lead to be less active and agile especially stress, which is a big influencing factor that leads to anxiety and depression. Besides, spending all the times with books can lead to the reduction of practice skills and communicating skills. Extra activities act as a catalyst for broadening pupils’ horizon and experience. By engaging in them, pupils embrace the chance to develop themselves and maybe they are not to be disoriented and disillusioned in an adult social life.
There are a plethora of extracurricular activities which university students can refer. They can be easily impressed by some typical activities such as part-time jobs, voluntary work, to name but a few. Students who have part-time jobs in university may gain experience which will be helpful on a regular basic. Furthermore, they earn money that can be used for tuition or basic living expenses. Another activity worth mentioning is volunteer. Volunteering not only gives you a sense of purpose in your contributions but also builds personal relationships. All experience you get will be more attractive to future employers after graduation.
To sum up, I intensely believe that university students should make a great effort with their studying but to possess a comprehensive development, they also should not neglect extra curriculum, which can helps you to get out of overmuch fatigue of academic education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36858974359 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06463726426 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8469803846 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.6875 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243591568715 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081476356367 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607719244942 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15969426125 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776868217887 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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