Nowadays government creates several laws that badly affect to public. Why does government create these rules ?
What should people do for avoiding of this problem?
People are being suffered by laws, created government. From my point of view, it is doing this for increasing its budget. People should complain to head of government and explain the situation that makes them suffer.
To start for increasing budget government always find some new laws.
First, people are suffered from the rules which cannot be affordable for them. Although government do not care them, they only think about money, in spite of poor conditions of some people.
Secondly, according to my opinion finding laws which include taxes, such as paying money for driving car with black windows. If people do exact payment for that problems can be easily solved. And also laws like prohibiting walking on street after 11 p.m., it influences people negatively because some people desire to relax with walking on street at silent night but they have to pay for it.
Turn to second part, for getting rid of this trouble, people ought to demonstrate their circumstances where they reside and how they earn money. If they can justify the situation that they are really being suffered, then government must have to change the rules which they created. For example a poor person who lives in an ancient house and his or her income is only adequate to provide his or herself. Of course introducing with this kind of stipulation, government can not stay without giving a hand.
In conclusion government ought not to find these laws without understanding opinions of people. If they create them without agreements of people, then it can be useful to both sides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, kind of, of course, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98859315589 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4902765992 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615969581749 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7308529108 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4666666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257467523138 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935921752907 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366824333011 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139895637073 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040944842423 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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