Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
The problems of alternative medicines and always debatable has now become more controversial with many people alarming that it in hazardous while others disagree. In my opinion, this proposition in a negative improvement. However, at present, most of the individuals are depending on replace medications and treatments apart from going the physicians. This essay will elaborate the reasons of disadvantages of this trend to the looming paragraphs.
To begin with, alternative treatments and medicines cause for several diseases winch sometimes call death such are cancer, kidney damage, heart blocking. Nowadays many people are going to pharmacy to buy medicines and the salesmen advise them without any inquiry. As a result, they are surviving savior diseases. For example, a survey done by ‘NEWS 24' in Bangladesh in 2020 most of the dengue patient facing brain shack problem by lacking inaccurate treatments except doctors. Thus, it cannot deny that those treatments destroy human body.
On the other hand, if shopkeepers a chance to give free treatments without any test, it will be demolished a nation rapidly. To take an example, children are also suffering by incorrect medicines, parents want to avoid expending for medical treatments. Due to the fact that a large number of children effected by paralyses, diabetics and so on. Therefore, it is clearly mentioned that why many are against with the trend.
In conclusion, according to the arguments it is mentioned above one can a conclusion that the drawbacks of replacement medication and treatments too dire to ignore. However, individuals should be concerned about taking any medicines without analysis
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...xcept doctors. Thus, it cannot deny that those treatments destroy human body. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44615384615 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95607888373 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6634481419 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18502738709 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052997892637 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401539575068 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101412116293 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576075647897 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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