Some people believe that the world is much less safe today than it used to be. There are still many wars being fought and high tech weapons are sold openly to any country that wants to buy them. In cities, violent crime is increasing every year.
It is not a very safe world in which to bring up children.
Do you agree or disagree?
Many argue that the world today is more vulnerable to crime than earlier years. Various instances of fights amongst nations are cited. Sophisticated lethal weapons are manufactured and supplied to those who demand. Besides this, our cities are witnessing an increase in violent activities day by day. It is opined that this planet is not the conducive place to live for us and posterity. I strongly favour this statement.
To commence with, the prime reason of this dangerous atmosphere is an easy access to weapons, of all. Advanced technology has enabled countries to make nuclear weapons, a big threat to humanity. On the top of this, youngsters can get hold of guns and pistols easily. This possession of weapons is posing threat to lives. Many cases of shooting by youth, in colleges and universities of America, are reported recently.
Furthermore, all nations are striving to have hold on the energy resources. This mad rat race of claiming the sovereignty over others makes countries indulge in bloody skirmishes. In such atmosphere, teaching moral values to children is becoming futile exercise.
In addition to this, xenophobia is another responsible reason for spoiling the peace on this globe. Countries are intolerant about other races, cultures and ideologies. The discrimination between black and white and rich and poor is spoiling the ambience of the society these days unlike earlier decades when people used to be more tolerant and friendly for others.
Lastly, all cities are becoming dens of criminals. Theft, burglary, corruption and murder etcetera are such crimes which are on rise these days. Poverty, unemployment and illiteracy is considered the root cause of people turning into hard core criminals, whereas, our past generations had safe and crime free life.
To conclude, it is affirmed that modern world is more prone to crime and criminals. This place is not suitable to live on for our young generations as they will not learn anything valuable here. It becomes our moral responsibility to make this land a place worth living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 279, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'activities'' or 'activity's'?
Suggestion: activities'; activity's
...s are witnessing an increase in violent activities day by day. It is opined that this plan...
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Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
... reason of this dangerous atmosphere is an easy access to weapons, of all. Advanced technology...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, lastly, so, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2125748503 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77025073707 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616766467066 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5399689026 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6956521739 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5217391304 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52173913043 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118786419768 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0303794456105 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385213302361 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0563592207351 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336987825595 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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