Because of the widespread of a variety of medical treatments, patients nowadays are inclined to turn their backs on the standard treatment and seek for alternative drugs and remedies. Personally, I partly disagree with this phenomenon.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that relying on these alternative curing method do have several advantages in some aspects. Since this type of medical treatments is mainly originated in our ancestor’s era in particular indigenous regions, it is not exaggerated to say that these alternative methods can be guaranteed to be efficacious. As a result of being passed down through numerous generations, those replacement treatments have gained much belief from the public. For example, acupuncture is globally one of the most popular alternative treatment, and a myriad of people experiencing it claimed that it will do wonders to your body.
On the other hand, people should believe in the treatments that have underwent clinical experiments; therefore, usual medical treatments ought to be followed. Visiting the normal hospital will provide you much more quality medical advices and remedies, which results in the fact that all the modern medical treatments have been scientifically proved to benefit us. With the enduring history of medical and the advance of current chemical industry, it totally a bad idea not to follow this type of treatment. Moreover, over-relying on alternative pharmaceutical method can pose a threat on your heath, since not all the doctors in this field actually have experience of their profession.
To recapitulate, over-depending on alternative medicines and treatments can lead to undesirable consequences. To the best of my knowledge, I suggest that the public should find a way to combine two kinds of this treatments wisely to have a great health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'undergone'.
Suggestion: undergone
...uld believe in the treatments that have underwent clinical experiments; therefore, usual ...
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Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ould find a way to combine two kinds of this treatments wisely to have a great healt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in particular, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40909090909 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16222546801 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583916083916 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6174032005 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.916666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235222112659 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859041220721 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253319132471 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142466195604 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179560287794 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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