Since we are living in a well-developed world, high technology devices are now available to people from all segments of society. Therefore, smartphone has been become accessible to all the children in general, which leads to a widespread of phone-addicted cases in youngsters. This essay will elaborate on the cause and both sides of this phenomenon.
The term of phone-addicted can be defined as the cases when the children can spend lots of their time phubbing smartphones and this social problem can be attributed to some reasons below. First of all, the children are intensely lack outdoor activities because of their schedules full of schoolwork and extra classes. Apparently, the parents nowadays really dignify the significance of studying and have a predisposition toward forcing their children to attain higher academic level; as a result, you may find children studying in classes or logging in social media more than involving in extra curricular activities. Secondly, due to being busy with work, parents hardly have chances of strictly managing their children. In lieu of being monitored by their parents, the children can use their smartphones any time they want.
On the one hand, this issue have a number of detrimental impacts on the children development. Firstly, there is a myriad of cases that children have to suffer from autism as a result of taking to much time to use smartphone. Consequently, it is evident that their interaction with community will be reduced, which can directly impose a threat upon their future. Secondly, since social media contains a wide variety of information, the children may accidentally log into some inappropriate website. As a consequence, this will badly affect their natural mental development. On the other hand, under the circumstance of being aware of ultimate advantages of using smartphone, the children will be benefit from using it for their self-developed purposes. In stead of gluing their eyes to the social media all day, they can use their smartphone as a helpful assistant because of its diversity of information.
To recapitulate, knowing all the causes of this social problem will alleviate the difficulty of finding solution process. Personally, I suggest that parents should spend more time with their children to help them to be more active and aware of the real value of having a smartphone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'lacked'.
Suggestion: lacked
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...uffer from autism as a result of taking to much time to use smartphone. Consequent...
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Line 5, column 753, Rule ID: IN_STEAD_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Instead of'?
Suggestion: Instead of
...g it for their self-developed purposes. In stead of gluing their eyes to the social media a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in general, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24409448819 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9954556231 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535433070866 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8895948604 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.529411765 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4117647059 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35294117647 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268740890255 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934343618888 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420225452593 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171511336496 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394007970143 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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