Nowadays, it is not only large companies that are able to make films as digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, more and more technological advances allow anyone make films. The film industry has been expanded so people can watch all genres of movie that they like. In this essay, I will discuss both perspectives.
On the one hand, everyone can produce films that seem positive for some reasons. The film industry can reach a higher level of quality because of its growth. For example, having talented actors will make that movie more popular and the plot is also part of a movie. And day by day as the film industry continues to develop, competition will help filmmakers improve and create more filmmakers' creativity. Beside that, make-up artists play a crucial role to create a film look that makes the performer look more beautiful, more complete when filming to create an impressive feeling for viewers.
On the other hand, a large number of filmmakers can cause some trouble. Some filmmakers manufacture films that contain violent content or adult films that are harmful to viewers. Film is growing, and underage children are watching inappropriate movies that affect their thinking. In addition, ghost movies are also not appropriate because people will believe the matter is real.
In conclusion, with the development of filmmakers may have advantages and disadvantages but because of its development we have interesting movies to relieve stress or kill time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'filmmakers'' or 'filmmaker's'?
Suggestion: filmmakers'; filmmaker's
...help filmmakers improve and create more filmmakers creativity. Beside that, make-up artist...
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...e an impressive feeling for viewers. On the other hand, a large number of fil...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...for viewers. On the other hand, a large number of filmmakers can cause some trouble. Some...
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...ple will believe the matter is real. In conclusion, with the development of f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23214285714 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.709523548 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611607142857 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8673837118 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1538461538 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2108272906 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745979058397 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425546201445 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118442544408 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459745642614 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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