Nowadays it is not only large companies that can make films Digital technology enables anyone to produce films Do you think it is a positive or negative development

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Nowadays it is not only large companies that can make films. Digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

There has been a growth towards anyone being able to produce film by technology development without a professional film crew. I believe that these trends are both positive and negative.

Many current amateur filmmakers are not high-professional trained so amateur films are highly likely limited in aesthetic aspect. Everyone has their own ideas of what makes a good movie, they can create a movie based on the true life sides that some directors can not access easily. For example, the school movie will reflect student’s activities the most exact way if they are made by highschool pupils, and all of that can be done by just a smartphone. In addition, content creators can earn an income stable because they can access multiple ways to monetize from their content. To advertising, they collaborate with sponsorships from a major brand, fan funding. For instance, making money from Youtube is as simple as uploading great content, garnering millions of views and earning a share with advertising revenue.

On the negative side, amateur films are released without censoring sensitive content such as violence, which can influence children’s development. Some scientists believe that exposure to violent media as a child predicts aggressive behaviour many years later as an adult. Also, this trend has an impact on qualified directors and actors. Many movies' value, which is made by unique ideas and specular acting, decrease in the eyes of the public when the amateur films appear too much. When a movie comes out and garners attention and commercial success, the amatuer will remake it with the same content without film screening license, which discourages the creative people continuing their work.

in conclusion, this trend is both positive in the sense that it encourages more ideas and creates income, and negative.as it affects children and professional directors and actors.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... and professional directors and actors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3122923588 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75267163582 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1329353116 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.214285714 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175141395699 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582475311872 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700216713247 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118969609898 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894272873677 0.056905535591 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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