Nowadays, it is possible to move ocean creatures from their natural habitat at sea and have them relocated in amusement parks for the purpose of people's recreation. Do you think the advantageous of this development outweigh the disadvantages explain your reasons and support them with specific examples?
The discovery of world wide web has totally changed the living standard of marine so, the aquatic mammals migrate from large water bodies to zoo for individual enjoyment whether it is plausible or not ? This essay discuss with why merits are more water creatures to stay in zoo rather than demerits of this.
To begin with, an invention of enormously museum in the world wide for folk feeling rejenuvate. Firstly, it is beneficial to nation owing to this, most visitors as well as researcher especially, philosopher are coming at zoo and secondly, an expenditure chunk of money so, Due to this reason, the economy is plummet. Moreover, in Kerala the fishermen hunting the fish and an aquatic animals purpose of food since, they are responsible to extinction of marine species. For this, the museum is best environment to protect endangered species. Lastly, a marine specimen intake proper nourishment and medical treatment when, any disease occur during to stay in marine santuries. Hence, these are bright side of water creatures live in zoos.
On the other hand, there are but very few darkside of aquatic animals lives in park as compared to sea. An aquatic fauna reside in salt water to obtain freedom and do move from one place to another without any restriction of someone. Secondly, if, endangered species such as whale, dolphin and many more take it museum so they are create this happen to detrimental impact on human beings like attack on living creatures. The best epitome of this is in the India sanctuaries one harmful specie injured the children when, they seem fauna in their zoo.
To conclude that, the essay has discussed with how the pros are more water fauna live in amusement park outweigh the demerits of it. A museum is good source helps to increase level of knowledge and economy as soon as endangered species of nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as to, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92971246006 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53203139978 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58785942492 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8018312308 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.214285714 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121398388234 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420557922174 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248278784451 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727044375857 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118542259949 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.