Some people prefer to live in a house while others feel that where are more advantageous to living in an apartment . Are there more advantageous than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment.
In modernised era, a folk requirement are upsurge day-by-day living standard so that a few of individual like to habitat in a home instead of residing in an living sectors. This essay will discuss the merits are more stay in blocks rather than demerits of live in accommodation.
To begin with, an apartment has played significant role in job people. Since, a number of individual select to metropolitan city to stay in apartments as soon as, they live together in their while doing job in biggest city and earn money to live in apartment and those people live in blocks who does not feasible to buy home so,.they prefer to residing less expensive flat. A good illustration of this is an individual of Canada united kingdom specially, student select to blocks during study and fulfill own demand to get ambition and desire of life . Hence , there are bright side of living in an apartment.
On the flip side, there are but very few darkside of resident in blocks. a most people choose to live house because it has plethora of benefit for human beings owing to this sufficient environment of intake fresh air. Secondly, an individual live at home and move freely anywhere without any restriction.Due to this reason, most people of behaviour is not like to interference someone and want to stay alone . The best epitome of this is the people of rural area especially, farmers grown crops in villages and built the house and stay in it . Hence, these are some demerits of accommodation rather than home.
To conclude that, this essay discussed how the merits are more living in an apartment as compared to drawbacks of house because of blocks is sophisticated ambience of metropolitan city but it is rely on behaviour of individual to choose stay in home and apartment .
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- Some people prefer to live in a house while others feel that where are more advantageous to living in an apartment . Are there more advantageous than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the biggest'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, second, secondly, so, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82894736842 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76908832438 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536184210526 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.3363809435 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.333333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377783705599 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13774484369 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841446743195 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240766911262 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336577265288 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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