In the modern society, online advertisements seem to introduce several of commercial trading when people are browsing the Internet. This service does provide a platform for many small businesses in the competitive market and consumer can have more options to know the new tech products or services.
Advertisements used to be an expensive budget for a company, due to the growing of Internet users that website could provide the ads service for commercial purpose. It is not only to support the survival of the websites, but also the cheaper way of advertisement for the small companies. Take an example of Facebook, they provide the ads platform for many companies, so they can gain the support to promote their service and the company can publish their products or services in the famous social media that many people are use. Therefore, advertisements become affordable for many companies.
In addition to the consumers, those cyber ads introduce several new tech and services, so they don't need to go to the real store to find the new things. it used to say that news helps people know everything without travel, so the online advertisements do introducing the great service or technology to the potential consumers. For example, the camera drone that I recently seen from the internet ads and this advance technology product did inspire me to have it, so I can film the different angel from the top of the place when I travel. Therefore, Internet was invented to search the information globally, so the online advertisements also introducing the new thing for the user.
In conclusion, this is not a bad thing to see many websites contain the online ads. It is important for the company to introduce their brand for the potential customers and the website can gain the support from the advertisement profits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... several new tech and services, so they dont need to go to the real store to find th...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... the real store to find the new things. it used to say that news helps people know...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01650165017 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86945808745 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491749174917 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.5124684598 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287848036547 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117788252912 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636563855324 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199893613619 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747068575568 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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