Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?
With the gradual formation of international society, it is usual that major cities have large populations come from all over the world. Therefore, how to live together with other people who have different culture and background in a harmonious way is a critical problem for cosmopolitan cities.
Firstly, it is all well to improve the recognition of different countries through education. For example, the education department should add a variety of cultures from other countries in students' history textbook, instead of just teaching the home nation's history. By learning how others live we gain insight into the alternative culture and ways of life which makes us easier to comprehend other behavior and thoughts.
Secondly, legislation should be revised by the government to protect the safety and religions of immigrants. If the arrivals cannot live in their prefer life, it would damage the varies of cultures and increase the dissatisfied emotion of <span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 14pt;">outlanders</span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">. By ensuring people feel safe will promote integration and show the host country's civilized.</span><br>
Finally, immigrants should be given the opportunity to free learn the local language. It is obviously that if they do not know the local language, they would not be able to absorb local culture correctly. By acquiring the language and knowledge about the culture, they will integrate more easily and comfortably without losing their own identity.
In summary, understanding different cultures is the key to living together harmoniously. At the same time, the government should take some measures to respect the different culture and protect the local culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a harmonious way" with adverb for "harmonious"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...o have different culture and background in a harmonious way is a critical problem for cosmopolitan ...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...book, instead of just teaching the home nations history. By learning how others live we...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74615384615 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.83374922707 2.80592935109 137% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626923076923 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.926943769 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201021845003 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072869734459 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077665704002 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112723175406 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121609874313 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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