Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously.
In our modern society today some of people are migrating in other country to work or to live there for good. However, the government should make it a great deal that their people will live without aggravating by others.
In our generation today people in other country tend to live mostly in english countries because they get an opportunity to live and work there. They are staying in such a long time it is because they earn more than double rather than to their own country. For instance, if they want to move to other country they will know to obey specially the cultures, religion and how do people respect from each other. Migrants should know how to socialize to those people but the important thing that they know how to cope up with their traditional culture of other country. Every country has different cultures and people must know when and they celebrate specifically the festival and holidays.
On the other hand, the government should make it sure that their people will live harmoniously that they are not going to have a problem with the migrants. Fortunately those migrants people will need to get a visa before they can enter to some cosmopolitan cities around the world. They will need to have a full screening on what is their purpose to that country.
In summary, there might be no problem if people in other countries would respect each other. The government will also trained those people by disciplining in their work. For people who wants to work or to live in cosmopolitan cities should know the things that they will need to cope up with such as traditional culture. With that, they can live with peace and happy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the people') or simply say ''some people''.
Suggestion: some of the people; some people
In our modern society today some of people are migrating in other country to work ...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'train'
Suggestion: train
...ct each other. The government will also trained those people by disciplining in their w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for instance, in summary, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8615916955 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.400960245 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.703344316 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.357142857 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248146207759 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109097430921 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491749981605 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183347795751 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353051759934 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.