In this days, in families both parents are working for their family’s bright future. Due to their tough schedule of work they cannot take care of their own child. In this situation in joint families grandparents, uncle aunt of kid’s can take care of them. But in nuclear family parents have to put their child in children care centre. In this essay, both the views will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
Caretaking is the significant part of children’s growth. In joint families other family members can take care of child. It is very beneficial for child and their parents. Firstly, the kid is under observation of their loved ones. So that, parents do not have to worry about their child. What is more, a child become well Mannered, cultured and follow the tradition of family as well as country. Kid get acknowledge by their culture. Besides that it is time and money savings for parents.
Apart from that, in professional children care centre,they provide advanced technology equipments for children’s activities and entertainment. Kid become a friendly, good communicator, and batter in socialisation. In the child care centre they also take care if health and food. In the day care centre, there are many children at a time, so that they can not pay attention on any single one.
To summarise, both opinion have their own advantages. There are dark side of children day care centre. However, according to my perception, batter and well mannered caretaking of kid is by their own family members and loved ones.
- Nowadays many families have both parents working Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children while others think childcare centers provide the best care Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- Nowadays many families have both parents working Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children while others think childcare centers provide the best care Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
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...at, in professional children care centre,they provide advanced technology equipments ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, apart from, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02734375 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75037450841 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6059323335 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.35 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387091316581 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119421630072 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960789627663 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242342245357 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932103395648 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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