Nowadays, many people are forced to be apart from their family because of the job they have. This essay will discuss the negative aspects of this issue and put forward several solutions.
being away from family because of job could lead to negative effects on one`s productivity at work. As it causes serious psychology problems for the person. One of the mainly problems is depression. Missing family makes person anxious and this can result in sadness for the employee. For example, when my father had to go to south for work and had to be miles away from us, after 2 month he got depression and said that he is not able to concentrate on his job. Thus, this issue inflicted some problems at his workplace.
One of the solutions to this issue is that government should develop infrastructure of business and occupation so that everybody can easily find a suitable job near the place they live. Another way, is that if employees need to work in another city or country far from their home, they should take their family with themselves. Besides, employers could consider several days off in a month for their staffs so they can go and see their family at least at the beginning of the work until they get used to the new environment.
From what has been discussed above, one can conclude that working in a place away from family and friends has negative impacts on the person and even the quality of their performance at work. However, government and employees can use tact to tackle this problem.
Nowadays, many people are
Nowadays, many people are forced to be apart from their family because of the job they have. This essay will discuss the negative aspects of this issue and put forward several solutions.
being away from family because of job could lead to negative effects on one`s productivity at work. As it causes serious psychology problems for the person. One of the mainly problems is depression. Missing family makes person anxious and this can result in sadness for the employee. For example, when my father had to go to south for work and had to be miles away from us, after 2 month he got depression and said that he is not able to concentrate on his job. Thus, this issue inflicted some problems at his workplace.
One of the solutions to this issue is that government should develop infrastructure of business and occupation so that everybody can easily find a suitable job near the place they live. Another way, is that if employees need to work in another city or country far from their home, they should take their family with themselves. Besides, employers could consider several days off in a month for their staffs so they can go and see their family at least at the beginning of the work until they get used to the new environment.
From what has been discussed above, one can conclude that working in a place away from family and friends has negative impacts on the person and even the quality of their performance at work. However, government and employees can use tact to tackle this problem.
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...ects on one's productivity at work.As it causes serious
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 41.998997996 21% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 262.0 1615.20841683 16% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 51.0 315.596192385 16% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13725490196 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.67234511778 4.20363070211 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45152935029 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 42.0 176.041082164 24% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.823529411765 0.561755894193 147% => OK
syllable_count: 84.6 506.74238477 17% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.5 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269856930022 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204203643635 0.084324248473 242% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262514233811 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204203643635 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262514233811 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 14.0 78.4519038076 18% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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