Nowadays many job seekers are finding jobs that force them to move far from their family and friends. Is it a positive or a negative trend? What can be done about it?
With the world becoming extremely populated, the search for jobs has also become more competitive. This leads candidates to expand their searches and consequently move far from their family and friends. This trend might have a negative impact and some changes must be sought, what will be explored in the following paragraphs.
Unfortunately, living far from their loved ones might trigger depression in some people. It takes time to get to know an area and make friends, especially in the beginning, so people start feeling lonely. If the person is older, for example, it is even harder to start a friendship when everybody around has already created their social circles. This is different from children whose mothers schedule play dates with other children.
However, employers play an important role in this scenario. Since companies are hiring people from abroad, they should arrange for this transition to be smoother. For instance, employers could allow employees monthly days offs so they could visit relatives, at least during the first months. In addition, some offices in Brazil have started group activities to include new hires and give them the opportunity to fraternize with their co-workers. In sum, there are many ways for employers to help their new employees adapt to the new environment.
In conclusion, although one of the downsides of finding job opportunities abroad is loneliness and possible depression, employers should be responsible for this transition and for making it easier. In this essay, I have presented the negative impact of living far from family and friends, but also offered some suggestions to minimize it.
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28517110266 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74653709306 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627376425856 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9322898427 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2857142857 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222813936562 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728108350945 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628742920597 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145524644303 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769262567167 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.