There are various ways to earn for living, including being employees of someone else's company and also being self-employed. These days, a lot of people do not want to be an employees of corporations anymore. Otherwise, they decide to be self-employed. This essay will discuss the reasons why this situation happens, and also the possible drawbacks of this situation.
There are some reasons that makes people consider quitting from being employees and being self-employed. Firstly, being an employee lacks time flexibility. This is because, the vacation days for employees are very limited and also employees have fixed working schedule. This is different from being a self-employed, where people can decide by themselves about their working schedule and day-offs. Secondly, employee often gets pressure from the boss, which makes doing a job becomes so stressful. Moreover, as people's position in a company rise, they will have more pressures and demands from bosses. On the contrary, people who decide to be self-employed have no pressure from bosses because they are their own bosses in their own businesses.
However, there are several possible downsides of being self-employed. Firstly, people who choose to be self-employed have to be responsible for every decision that may affect their businesses continuity. This is different from being an employee, where employee only needs to do ordered tasks without having to think about the business continuity. Next, being self-employed have bigger risk to have an unstable income because the possibility of self-employed people to fail at first is bigger than to be an employee. Otherwise, employee usually has fixed income from the company, no matter in what condition the company is.
In conclusion, a lot of people decided to be self-employed because of several advantages including having more time-flexibility and not having pressure from bosses. However, there are also possible drawbacks to consider including to be fully responsible about decisions related to their businesses continuity, and the high possibility to have unstable income.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an employee' or simply 'employees'?
Suggestion: an employee; employees
...days, a lot of people do not want to be an employees of corporations anymore. Otherwise, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01567691742 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475308641975 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4216374225 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418113286273 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168785997335 0.084324248473 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105399166848 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299332850528 0.151304729494 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834822367106 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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