It is true that in life, we often face the situation that we never wish to happen, and reacting to this condition, some people tend to accept it. However, in my opinion, trying and improving are better than just accepting.
Sometimes, bad situations occur in our life journey, and reacting to them, some people may just accept it and think it. This is a good option, because it will give some positive impact to our life. Consider an example, where a worker has worked hard yet only get minimum wages. But, he choose to accept this situation and always be grateful. As a result, this situation doesn't make him become sad or disappoint, and thus, doesn't lead to low working performance. We can see that behaving like this will produce positive impact to our life. But, in my opinion, by only accepting, we won't think about the way to be someone better, because we are already satisfied with our condition. So, accepting is not enough.
On the other hand, trying and improving are better. Firstly, by trying and improving, we will think about how to develop our skills, thus, will lead to the increase of our performance. A student may always fail on his TOEFL test, but instead of just accepting the fact that he has failed, he always try to improve his score, until finally he is able to reach his target score. Secondly, by trying and improving, people will have more spirit and desire in their life. A worker can just accept being someone with low salary, and living in his "boring" life, because he has nothing to struggle with. But, he choose to improve his skills and try to apply in other better workplaces, so his life is filled with desire to be a better worker, and thus, lead to more enthusiastic life.
In conclusion, people may have different reactions to a bad condition, either by accepting or trying and improving. In my opinion, trying and improving are better because it have some positive advantages to people's life.
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- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010 73
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatifactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'chooses'.
Suggestion: chooses
...ard yet only get minimum wages. But, he choose to accept this situation and always be ...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...e grateful. As a result, this situation doesnt make him become sad or disappoint, and ...
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Line 3, column 423, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...him become sad or disappoint, and thus, doesnt lead to low working performance. We can...
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Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tries'.
Suggestion: tries
... the fact that he has failed, he always try to improve his score, until finally he ...
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Line 5, column 616, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'chooses'.
Suggestion: chooses
...e has nothing to struggle with. But, he choose to improve his skills and try to apply ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 175, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...ing and improving are better because it have some positive advantages to peoples lif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 6.8 279% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 5.60731707317 803% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 965.302439024 167% => OK
No of words: 341.0 196.424390244 174% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73020527859 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5539811513 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 106.607317073 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475073313783 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 283.868780488 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3200620784 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6111111111 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 3.70975609756 404% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16650160187 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722646633789 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611801710164 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133951347136 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045392338132 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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