It's very common nowadays for the majority of people to establish their own set ups instead of working for another company. There are various reasons why this happens and its demerits, which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
The trend of someone setting their own business have many reasons. Firstly, there is a lot of competition for having a job for one vacancy. This is due to the fact that people have higher degree but limited places which causes them to compete with other deserving candidates for that. As a result of it, they have to work somewhere such as a restaurant which again doesn't match their level of degree. Therefore, they end up starting up a business and being self employed such as an entrepreneur, you tuber and many more. Secondly, it is very straight and convenient to get a loan from banks which makes the process of setting up smooth. This is the reason why every second person is willing to start a business to make their living. Hence, these two are the reasons why there are many start ups.
If we dig deep down into the matter of being self employed, it also bears downside. First of all, such businesses never guarantee the success. In other words, most of such approaches never be able to survive for a long time due to stiff competition. This somewhere can lead to a lack of motivation and enthusiasm later. Second demerit of it is that someone doing this so may not have a consistent pay as that wage may depend your toil, yet days can never be the same. Therefore, one can face financial difficulties easily. For example, someone may expect a fixed pay every month if he or she works for a company instead of going on his or her own.
In conclusion, it's highly common for people to set up a new business because of lack of opportunities and convenience of getting a loan, yet someone still have to face the spinster side of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ewhere such as a restaurant which again doesnt match their level of degree. Therefore,...
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Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[6]
Message: 'He' in subjunctive clause must be used base form of the verb: 'do'.
Suggestion: do
...r. Second demerit of it is that someone doing this so may not have a consistent pay a...
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Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ce of getting a loan, yet someone still have to face the spinster side of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57692307692 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49965685121 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565088757396 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7700561026 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9444444444 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27777777778 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23787760071 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693523095708 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588135103556 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140656236928 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637418540851 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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