There are many ways to earn for a living. Today, people decided to be self-employed than to be company's employees. This essay will discuss some reasons which cause this phenomena to happen and will explain the potential downsides of this situation.
There are some reasons which made this situation to occur. Firstly, being an employee lacks time flexibility. People who become employees usually lack time to spend with their family members and friends. Therefore, they decided to be self-employed in order to have more time flexibility. Secondly, employees have a lot pressures and demands from their bosses. This is because everyday their bosses usually put targets and tasks to finish which make them to feel stressed. As a result, they decided to become self-employed so they will not have bosses who will put targets and demands on their shoulders.
However, there are some potential drawbacks of being self-employed. Firstly, being self-employed is more risky than being an employee. This is because, they have to think about the proper funding sources and right business strategy for their own businesses to survive. This is different with being employees, where what they need to think are just their own responsibilities according to their own job descriptions. Secondly, being self-employed is prone to have less business connection. This is because, usually self-employed is started from a small business which only consist of small group of people. This is in contrast to be employees, where people can meet a lot of co-workers and colleagues which enable them to grow their networks easily.
In conclusion, a lot of people decided to be self-employed because being an employee lacks time flexibility, and employees have a lot pressures and demands from their bosses. Nevertheless, there are some potential drawbacks of being self-employed such as it is more risky than being an employee, and prone to have less business connection.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28295819936 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94615540677 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43729903537 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5215849716 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4736842105 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3684210526 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393712617375 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159550017049 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141026498762 0.0667982634062 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300024257155 0.151304729494 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084739182303 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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