Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.Why might this be the case?What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Essay topics:

Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.

Why might this be the case?

What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

To majority most contemporary economics allow such a model of employment as being self-employed, which appeared very tempting for many. However, still the act of majority of people opt for being employed in a company and not to set up their own businesses. This essay will attempt to look into key factors as why people may prefer interpretenship to draw back their design.

It is a major problem as it is seen in Turkey, employee wit highly demanded least of desire trying to force employers to be satisfied with the conditions they provide. For instance, overwork with a low amount of incomes. This matter delude employers and their futures for the young ones to not to will to work properly. Therefore having a thought of being self-employed is encounter in their minds.

Regarding to the problem that immentioned above being self-employer has got its disadvantages. Being on unskilled, young and inexperienced are the dramatic criteria that, self-employed is always faced with it. If they higher people to perform this tasks, they must pay more tak and provide their employees with decent working condition. At the same time, business is usually a risky matter in our competitive reality many of them go bankrupt. Last but not least, self-employed people are the only people responsible for own vacations, sick or maternity leaves or any job perks.

So, in a nut shell, being your own master has many downsides, that is why many people decided to play it safe.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...g ones to not to will to work properly. Therefore having a thought of being self-employed...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, regarding, so, still, therefore, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9918699187 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89041255954 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638211382114 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2357665992 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.4615384615 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393720313656 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140152263805 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775686178991 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244612697077 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303647695386 0.056905535591 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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