It is undoubted that thanks to economic growth and society development, laborers have numerous choices for their workplaces. These days, while being employed in a company is considered as a common option, there is a fact that more and more people decide to devote either a part or even their entire working period for their own business. In my opinion, there are plenty of reasons for this trend; however, this phenomenon is also likely to bring many harmful impacts.
To begin with, entrepreneurship can be encouraged by a lot of reasons. One of the most noticeable explanations for this is that self-employment gives people the opportunity to maximize their job satisfaction as much as possible. Each organization has its own rules and behavior with which employees are required to comply; meanwhile, a number of those including salary, promotion and corporate culture factors may not satisfy workers’ expectations. In contrast, by working for themselves, people get their income depending on their own ability and have the right to decide how their business operates without being affected by their manager and co-workers. Besides, there is an argument that self-employed make people more mature since it is a good method to challenge themselves. This can be explained by the fact that self-employed laborers have to not only find a huge money to run their work, but also plan and be responsible for everything related to their business by themselves, whereas if they are employed by others, they just need to complete their tasks and will be paid a steady amount of wage monthly.
On the other hand, I agree with those who argue that self-employed can be negative in some ways. Firstly, multi-tasking must be an indispensable skill the entrepreneurs need to equip. They are forced to take responsibilities of different roles at the same time due to their limited budget. If they hire other people to perform these tasks, they must pay more tax and provide their employees with decent working conditions. Furthermore, self-employment can be considered as a waste if it goes bankrupt since the owner has to spend an enormous amount of time, capital and effort on their business without getting anything in return.
In conclusion, being self-employed is becoming more and more popular because of several reasons; however, it seems to me that this trend could have many adverse impacts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...; meanwhile, a number of those including salary, promotion and corporate culture ...
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Line 3, column 867, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'huge money'.
Suggestion: huge money
...employed laborers have to not only find a huge money to run their work, but also plan and be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, whereas, while, as to, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2009.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98273418135 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558673469388 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.5188360959 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.933333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1333333333 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2666666667 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339395676649 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12190741708 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826582379915 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227369882683 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391971011323 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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