Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company organization.
Why this might be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
The fast growth of this society has put pressure on us to improve our understanding as well as our opinion about different aspects to adapt to a new environment. Many people nowadays choose themselves a new way to start their careers independently rather than applying for a company or community.
From the perspective of many individuals, being self-employed gives them comfort and convenience. It may be true in some ways because an autonomous work environment gives them an advantage in being more relaxed and comfortable than when they have to follow the strict principles of a company. This is a springboard for them to boost their spirits and create higher productivity. Besides, people choose to work independently can freely decide the most suitable place to work. This flexibility can benefit a lot for everyone especially the young parents to have more time taking care of their babies and doing housework as well.
Secondly, the severance of today's job market makes people face a lot of difficulties in applying and getting their favorite job. Furthermore, many individuals are not satisfied with their salary because it is not suitable for their current economic climate. They even have to work overtime with the aim of earning more money to afford the basic necessities of life. This may have direct negative effects on their mental as well as physical health. Therefore, it is understandable why there are more and more people choose to be self-employed to reduce their stress level, fulfill their aim and extend their opportunity to make more profit.
However, this situation also remains many drawbacks when it comes to. People have to be self-reliant about finance and may get trouble in having enough money to invest in the field they have chosen. Besides, they may face a lot of unpredictable problems and have to suffer from those bad situations by themselves. Furthermore, it is very difficult for people who have just started their own careers to find out a market to consume their products. As a matter of fact, many consumers usually prefer big companies that have good reputations to the small and new ones because of the belief that famous companies may have more experience and better quality of service, in addition.
In conclusion, I think that although the idea of being self-employed is a good way for people nowadays to challenge themselves and gain more private achievements, there are still a lot of problems that they have to be concerned about. Therefore, everybody should launch a full-scale consideration into this situation and decide the best way for themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...aim of earning more money to afford the basic necessities of life. This may have direct negative ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2186.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 429.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09557109557 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91109249174 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522144522145 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 692.1 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3153708115 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.052631579 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5789473684 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42105263158 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282764669187 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902791006704 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830531564537 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177024108292 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639568983908 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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