Fashion, in simplest terms, can be defined as a trend that is created by some industry or celebrities in society. It can be about anything, one can't bound it only to dress or smart wearables. Also, it's not only about personal appearance but fashion brands have created million-dollar, if not billion-dollar revenue for countries.
Staying up to date not only makes us relevant to the community, yet also creates a positive image of people. The neighborhood will perceive that a person is moderate enough to walk in life with the current pace to the technological era.
It's not very convenient for everyone to be observed as an odd man in surroundings, so in a way fashion also helps to be more gluable. When people like talking to oneself or one feels that he is seen with likeness it boosts the confidence of a person.
Being in good shape with adequate fashion also makes us feel better about ourselves. One shall not corner himself/herself and continue to adapt to the changes time bring. As its well-known saying "Do it as the Romans do".
There are also economic benefits of fashion when money is spent within a limit on it. Therefore, its reasonable to conclude that the trend to follow fashin is an appreciatable approach.
- Nowadays many people following fashion trends and think that it’s very important. Is it a good or bad development? Include reasons and examples from your personal experience. 56
- Nations should suspend government funding for the arts when significant numbers of their citizens are hungry or unemployed.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning f 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8779342723 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91645671399 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638497652582 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2091935807 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.5833333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133090706683 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469221484095 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034234700512 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714351686945 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278461083135 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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