Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games.
What are the positive and negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?
In our society many people own computers and for this reason many kids play computer games. This Essay will not only analyze positive and negative effects of playing computer games but will also discuss about possible ways to reduce the bad effects.
Of course there are many positive impacts of playing computer games, because depending on the category that has been chosen, kids are able to develop cognitive skills or even exercise their brain. In fact, there are many different type of games and some of them will require to the player to solve problems or have a critical mind, in order to com...
This Essay will not only analyze positive and negative effects of playing computer games but will also discuss
This Essay will not only analyze positive and negative effects of playing computer games but also discuss
Sentence: On the other hand, unfortunatly, there are also many negative impacts, because many games can be diseducative for children especially if there is too much violence, like for example in war' s game.
Error: diseducative Suggestion: deductive
Error: unfortunatly Suggestion: unfortunately
Sentence: To conclude, it is obvious that if we concentrate and select certain games there are going to be more positive effects than negative but this is our responsability.
Error: responsability Suggestion: responsibility
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