Nowadays many people want to buy famous brands of clothes cars other items what are the reason for this do you think it is a positive or negative development.
Thesedays, some individuals want to purchase a popular and famous brands of clothes cars and other type of items and brand companies launch their product with large amount as well as a trip to the youngster. I think there are many negative develop ment as compared to positive development.
To commence with, in this modern epoch individuals are becoming open minded as well as for the latest trends day by day due to many branded companies everyday launch branded and fashionable materials as well as items these things at attract to the youth and generations moreover these organisations attract to the public through internet, TV and social as well as print media that is why most individual attractive and purchasing these kinds of item and losing their money on these branded things after that their target to the old persons.
Apart from that,. individuals believe that wears trending clothes, footwear and having luxury cars put a good impression on society as well as spending a huge amount of money on these materials. For example if one person is purchased the car which price is 800000 as well as also luxury car because they attractive to the brand as compared to other low prices of cars he save this amount of money as well as a started to his own business or invested this amount in the companies.
To recapitulate, more and more individuals who want to branded items because they attractive by companies whereas save their money which they spend on famous branded as well as they used is it in there on business and purposes.
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Suggestion: saves
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, apart from, as for, for example, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82330827068 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5961116922 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522556390977 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.579496052 49.4020404114 315% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.285714286 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.0 20.7667163134 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230523203312 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118458568407 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084506433448 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161371840271 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969463790584 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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