Nowadays many people work part or full time from home. Some people say that working from home has many benefits while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Opinions differ as to whether working from home would benefit people. In my view, I believe that this development has some negative impacts on individuals.
To begin with, it is understandable why some people say that working from home is beneficial. One reason is that workers could spend more time with their family members. Indeed, individuals could do their job while taking care of their children or having a barbecue with their parents simultaneously. This could not be done when people go to their office as they would be exhausted after work and ignore interaction with their close relatives when they get home. Another reason is that, in the time when the price of car fuel keeps increasing, working in people’s home would save them a large amount of traveling cost.
However, I side with those who do not accord to this tendency. One reason to support my standpoint is that staying at home will surely affect the accomplishment of workers’ tasks. Unlike at the office, individuals cannot have the best coordination with their colleagues even with the help of online communication. Some jobs still require an in-person cooperation in order to achieve synergy and great outcomes. For example, unless fashion designers face-to-face consult with their peers to get new designs, they will be stuck with less interesting ideas even when using online communication system because it brings no working excitement and motivation. Moreover, more time at home means that workers have less chance to expand their social network leading to a poor social experience.
In conclusion, while working from home does have some benefits, I believe they are not really appealing compared to the negative effects on people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
Opinions differ as to whether working from home would benefit people....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, really, so, still, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20430107527 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81301502524 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605734767025 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1057458016 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224263466511 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945211573741 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10412427475 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174165693153 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699575594397 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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