Nowadays many people work part or full time from home. Some people say that working from home has many benefits while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
These days, numerous individuals are able to work part-time or fulltime from home. In regard to this, some people believe that they will obtain countless upsides by working from home while others disagree about it. In accordance with this statement, this essay will explain both points of view and also put forward my perspective in the following paragraphs.
According to this issue, I do appreciate to the statement which thought that working from home will render masses more advantages. Nevertheless, I tend to think that having a job which is outside of home will confer individuals more strengths rather than working from home. Therefore, I tend to support the point of view which supported the opposite statement above.
Regarding to my argument above, there are various reasons of why I strongly agree to the opposite perspective. It, first and foremost, will bestow all individuals more experiences instead of work from home since they used to face something different every day, thereby, they are capable of acquiring new experiences each day. Second but not less crucial, masses, moreover, is able to expand their societal life because they are going to meet new people. Last but not least, it is apparent that it is going to provide new information to the people who also desire to expand their knowledges, particularly, the knowledges of how manage business properly.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me that working outside of home will give more benefits instead of working inside of home. Thus, in order to make us obtaining more advantages and fewer disadvantages, we are supposed to have a job outside of our home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, therefore, thus, while, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06642066421 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73548983631 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594095940959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3959704729 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.416666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287061720913 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110646444199 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986638412255 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181427159892 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768227148018 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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