Nowadays, more and more people are moving to the city in order to have a better life. However, life in cities has lots of difficulties. What should the government do to help improve life in big cities?
Nowadays, the people who are trying to find ways to live in big cities to have a good life has been increased sharply. Nevertheless, there are still lots of struggles of living in a big metropolis and the governments should have to do something to deal with this situation.
City residents could face up with a great deal of difficulties. To begin with, citizens must pay for the extravagant costs including accommodation, transportation, health-care system or even personal income taxes. Next, city commuters be in trouble with suffering from traffic congestion, especially on the prime-time traffic. As an illustration, they must wait for hours to travel through a main road. Beside, the municipality also offers high levels of pollution and noise caused by transports and industrial zones that could affect directly to people's health. As a result, city dwellers can catch up with lots of dangerous diseases relating to respiration and blood circulation.
All things considered, the governments must have some solution in order to solve the problem. Firstly, they should reduce the general costs for people who live in a big city on houses, cooking services or electricity uses. Furthermore, the country authorities could impose driving taxes for crowded road at rush hours in order to prevent traffic jam. Apart from that, they can also ban rules for factories not to release gases into the air and to encourage renewable energy utilise.
In conclusion, there are still wide ranges of problems when living in a big metropolis. Therefore, the governments should have some practical solutions to deal with this problem. Hence, it depends on each of us to choose the best place for our living and never forget that living in a big city is not always too easy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, apart from, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21052631579 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11969882771 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621052631579 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9880279898 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.071428571 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223509988877 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077133286966 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648768554986 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147298019523 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743476051544 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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