It is true that many young couples postpone their parenthood later in their life. This essay evaluates the possible reasons for this trend and also checks whether the benefits or drawbacks are more.
To begin with, there are three main reasons can be seen, why young couples postpone their parenthood. First of all, young married women nowadays want to pursue their career. They are not ready to sacrifice their career for the sake of marriage or children because they are more ambitious than the women in the past. To cite an example, the women nurses usually put off their pregnancy because many hospitals around the world asking a continuous experience in order to get a job. Another major reason is the cost of living soaring in the twenty-first century like never before. To rear and care, a child needs a moderate amount of money, which many couples unable to save in the current scenario. With the low salary they are getting from private firms it is difficult to meet both ends. Finally, young couples nowadays have a different philosophy towards the life. They think the sole purpose of life on earth is enjoyment. This attitude about life makes them to thinks that children are an unnecessary burden. For instance, the abortion rates among young couples in India increased recently due to this enjoyment attitudes towards the life. These above-mentioned reasons deter young people to having children early in their lives.
When looking at the advantages, there are some advantages for this trend. Firstly, postponing pregnancy provides financial stability for the family. Secondly, young couples especially youngsters can continue their carrer and reach in their dream positions in future. Moreover, having children is agreat resposibility and people who avoid children can have a lot of free times and enjoy their life.
However all the above mentioned advantages can be conquered with the drawbaks of this trend. First and foremost, the women carrying above 30s prone to several complications related to late pregnancy. The growing number of mortality rates of young womens due to late pregnancy complications is an example. Another detrimental effect of late pregnancy is, breaking up of relationships. Many couples breaking their relationships because their bond to each other is not strong enough. If couples have a child with in the initial two years of their married life, their love and affection to each other as well as towards the child will become stronger.
To conclude, by assessing the reasons and benefits and drawbacks of late pregnancy in couples it is evident that the disadvantagous are more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for instance, as well as, first of all, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2203.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 428.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14719626168 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6248822391 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539719626168 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.210636292 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.12 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.12 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279074400031 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764542014229 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657935373595 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181143280609 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513348553118 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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