Nowadays, more and more people use online shopping. Some people think it is a good development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It comes as no surprise that shopping on the Internet is increasingly popular. Therefore, many people believe that online shopping brings various benefits. In my opinion, although the trend has hidden dangerous elements, it also causes a bunch of advantages for residents.
First of all, shopping on the Internet can cause numerous profits for both customers and sales. Online customer shopping habit will help providers minimize the investment money. When providers start their own traditional shop, they need to rent an easy to access location, employ staffs and finding adequate goods. However, with shopping online, they just have to create an account on a website and choosing the goods they buy. In addition, shoppers also earn many benefits from this activity because they can buy whatever they want without spending time to travel to shopping mall and all things they have to do is surfing on the Internet and choosing the necessary products. For example, with the dangers of COVID-19 pandemic, many governments put their residence in quarantine to diminish the disease influence. So shopping online emerges a great solution for people to buy the adequate goods.
On the other hand, buyers are easy to disclose personal information if they buy products on the internet. This is because the security of the website is vulnerable for hackers to access and take vital details for criminal purposes, such as: selling individual details, using customers’ information for defrauding money or take money from their bank account. Moreover, sales also meet a plenty of risks if they do not improve their vigilance as the products are simple to transform in the shipping process. Due to the fact that it is hardly for providers to manage people who deliver goods to receivers as the website take that responsibility. Conspicuously, the bad shipper will take the goods or change it by unqualified products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2012987013 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71349332869 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581168831169 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0190912754 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.8 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125589127843 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508456124707 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498832591407 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926343503182 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193046584715 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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