Nowadays, more and more people use online shopping. Some people think it is a good development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The two maps depict how a beachfront area in Australia changed between 1950 and the present. From the overall perspective, this area has witnessed relatively extensive transformations and modifications, the most noticeable of which is the widening of the main road and the addition of recreational facilities.
Today, people tend to buy goods on the Internet rather than in stores. I strongly believe this tendency is beneficial since it brings a great number of advantages to our lives.
To begin with, online shopping allows people to purchase whatever they want without requiring them to go to official stores. This is because online shopping websites such as Amazon, Shopee, and Lazada provide buyers with a variety of products in different colors, shapes, and sizes. Take for example, shoppers can easily search for their favorite clothes that suit them with only one click on the websites. If there are no e-commerce websites, people must go to many different physical stores and spend time choosing the appropriate ones. Because of the advent of online shopping, people can spend more time working since they do not need to take time to commute and find the shops for their demands.
Besides, e-shopping is considered to be a more effective and convenient way than traditional shopping which allows people to buy things in case they do not have enough time for shopping due to their work. This is completely different from shopping in the past when going shopping in physical stores was the only way for shoppers to purchase essential things. Moreover, products bought online are delivered right to buyers so they can receive their goods at home instead of traveling far distances to physical stores.
In conclusion, e-commerce is a better development compared to in-store shopping for its benefits. Online shopping makes shopping easier and faster for purchasers, especially for those who do not have sufficient time to go to the official stores frequently.
- The maps below show a beachfront area in Australia in 1950 and today 11
- Nowadays more and more people use online shopping Some people think it is a good development To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy
- The maps show the changes of an office building between the present and the future 73
- The maps below show a beachfront area in Australia in 1950 and today 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 463, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... e-commerce websites, people must go to many different physical stores and spend time choosing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24451410658 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74563057233 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567398119122 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.890666905 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203711681472 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716198754712 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625196198779 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103429650708 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617719927827 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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