Nowadays more and more researches are being carried out and sponsored by private organizations. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages in such cases?
The discoveries in the field of science have been the order of the day. Presently, private organisations are actively participating in the research programs in order to ensure the rapid progress in different sectors. Here, i would like to assert that it has more benefits than drawbacks.
There are manifold merits of conducting researches. First and foremost, the development of a country is accelerated by the research programs. To illustrate, scientists could find out the new inventions, chances of improvement and advanced ways to do the work more effectively in the different fields. Besi...
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Essay evaluation report
Everything is fine except this flaw:
Avg. Sentence Length: 15 21.0
because you used a lot of transition words, like:
As a result, Adding to it, To be specific,...
instead, try to use more relative clauses or adverb clauses to make sentences longer.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 300 350
No. of Characters: 1642 1500
No. of Different Words: 183 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.162 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.473 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.133 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 137 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 110 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 89 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 61 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.173 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.7 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.244 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.486 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.013 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The discoveries in the field of science ...
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Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...id progress in different sectors. Here, i would like to assert that it has more b...
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Line 7, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...panies are making new additions in their products during research programs. Furth...
^^
Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...latest and exclusive designs of products are sold at higher prices to other natio...
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Line 9, column 282, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: of
...ial crisis. To be specific, a hefty sum of of money is invested during the experiment...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, in addition, as a result, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69333333333 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25073666865 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.937146945 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175662194083 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038065565014 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378257403734 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841512319296 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265625410075 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.13 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.