Nowadays more and more young people hold the important positions in the government. Some people think that is a good thing while others argue that it is not suitable. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that young people are often authorized to hold the top position in the government which is growing rapidly in recent years. Some people believe that this is a positive way of government to develop the country while others suppose that this trend is not reasonable. In my point of view, I agree that young people can bring many benefits for country in certain level.
On one hand, it is beneficial for all residents if young leaders are on the top seat of administration due to some reasons. Firstly, they have a better physical health than the old one. Since they are young, they can work many hours constantly to tackle the serious problems for a long time instead of working eight hours a day and going back home without worrying about the issues. Furthermore, young people always have better views to approach the issues. This could be because they not only understand the mordern technology nowadays but also they understand young people’s preference. As a result, new appropriate policies will be provided to deal with any issues in society. finally, young leaders are prefered by many people because the are less prone of corruption. In short, with their clean the tract of record, they will make a good impression on citizens.
One the other hand, young people can bring some negative impacts on our society. First and foremost, they are less social experiences which can cause many mistakes because of their hasty decision. As a consequence, their decision might negatively affect to all our society. In addition, A higher position in government should not be in the hands of young people due to they are not adequate qualification to manage such aspects of policy as the finances or foreign affair. For example if they have never faced many challenges in their career, they will have not enough experience as well as capabilities to cope with the problems.
In conclusion, although young leader can have some notable drawbacks to deal with the problems, it seems to me that they have an important role to play in promoting country’s development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in short, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92877492877 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67940198068 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54415954416 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9229614873 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.764705882 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.70588235294 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179781597239 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679433416379 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593007129563 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121760089319 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631971843048 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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