Nowadays, more and more young people hold the important positions in the government. Some people think that is a good thing while others argue that it is not suitable. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
it is true that today the development of society could be expected to live longer than before. it would have some negative result of this problem, so societies can take step to mitigate this potential issue.
In countries, governments gave economic policies or healthy policies that could improve life-span. Despite this positive development, the ageing has caused some issue for government. Firstly, the number of big longevity has effects on economic financial burden. The budget that government must provide assistance for retirement and medical care as well as receive less money in taxes in relation to the size of the population. Secondly, Each member of the family have to spend more time in taking care of the elderly. They would not concentrate in job so the labour productivity would be decreased that the financial of family could be effected.
However, there are some ways that government could consider resolving this issue. governments can increase the retirement age for working adult. Recent years in Viet Nam, the instead of 55 years was the retirement age, it was extended the age into 60 or 65 years because nowadays everybody is more healthy and better living conditions. In addition, reducing welfare for retirement age would be significant influence on aging population. governments would have budget to pay off economic activities and support to poverty that could be big impact on quality of life.
In conclusion, various ways can be taken to tackle the problems that are to arise as the population of countries grow older
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- To solve the ever increasing environmental hazards throughout the world the best way is to increase the price of fuel What is your opinion on the above assumption 83
- Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today.What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue? 61
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- In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individual and society? Suggest some measures that can be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations. 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1746031746 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74869125275 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579365079365 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6927897573 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1428571429 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0452676053186 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0176862713798 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289583349624 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0243022661263 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191146710994 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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