Nowadays more people are choosing to give with their friends or alone rather than with their family .what are the reasons and affect of their problem.

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Nowadays more people are choosing to give with their friends or alone rather than with their family .what are the reasons and affect of their problem.

Family play on important role in children life . gone are the days , when masses frefer live their family . but nowadays is opposite , this essay will discuss the cause behind this issue and how to overcome the concerning issue.

To begin with , there are many reasons behind this problem , first and foremost , city provids them many facilites such as ,education , medical , transportation , and so on . with the help of this . people can earn surplus money for to rurviva luxary life . moreover , if they can live without family and they can uplift their living standard . howover , they can also learn a lot of type of knowledge in cities . due to this people can earn burn the mid night oil.

Further , there are a lot of effects to live without family . living alone is the cause of homesickness apart from . it , people can inculcate in bad company such as drugs , become theft , criminal and so on . due to this , they can wast their money in wrong ways . they can forget moral value there is a lot of burden on live with family . moreover parents can not aware about their culture and taradition . they can full any culture

One could draw the conclusion , based on above discussion that masses should live alone in their life . but , some time must be spent with their family .

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, apart from, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74545454545 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30743646468 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577272727273 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1361324605 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.4117647059 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.9411764706 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11764705882 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 55.0 5.01903807615 1096% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233834033549 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844453081131 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631676604925 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167110064265 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537276729751 0.056905535591 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.38 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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