Family is the foundation of Life. It teach us how to interact with the world. We learned how to learn and how to be learned through family. It supports us in our ups and downs and hugs us tightly when we are in trouble. These days more people prefer to stay with their friends or alone in place of their families. This trend us possible to have a contrary impact in communities. I disagree with the given topic because most of them are forcing to leave their families in their native places in order to get more facilities such as a well settled job,higher education,not only spend time with friends but also develop their carrier.
Firstly the person who is living in village side dont have more facilities like good school,company which they want to Express their abilities. Therefore, they are leaving their families and going apart from them to keep them safe forever. There will be some difficulties to stay alone due to the budget is high for accommodation and living,so all are choosing their friends to saty with them.In this modern era no one is caring about others but busy with their own lives.so that this trend don't have any negative impact on communities.
Secondly ,the nondeveloping countries don't have enough budget to take care of the people who are belongs to them such as,no satisfied salary after work, high donation for eduaction.Hence the people are choosing western countries to settle their lives without struggles. This is the only option for them to develop their carrier in anyway.
In summary,this is the trend during this modern era that more people are staying alone or with their friends is not because they are interested but the situation make them to live apart from their families
- Nowadays there are more opportunities for women than there in the past .Some people think this situation has causes more problems than it has solved. What are your opinions on this? 67
- Nowadays more people are choosing to live with friends or alone rather than with their families. This trend is likely to have a negative impact on communities.To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: teaches
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... It supports us in our ups and downs and hugs us tightly when we are in trouble. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'leaving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, apart from, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84459459459 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53023174448 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543918918919 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.8395268924 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.307692308 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365528562609 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129274241099 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108538759112 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23543750637 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698228376579 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.