There has been considerable debate in recent years over the people of all ages who are deciding to live either alone or with friends and undoubtedly this is having an effect on the communities that they live in.This essay will outline the negative and positive sides of living alone without their families.
We must acknowledge that modern life means many people,exactly adults are choosing to live away from their families due to the reason they are studying and that would be the first cause . Secondly,people often have to travel away from their home town in order to get a job and it is causing to change of whole towns.
To begin with the negative sides of living lonely.People who are isolated from others,become distant from families that are the roots of existence. Furthermore, when they fall out with their flat mates they can get into troubles and undeniably there would not be nobody to care them.
Nevertheless, there are also some bright effects of this way of living. This kind of people tend to be more self-assured who are confident of themselfs rather than people living with their relatives. Lonely living humans treat each new experience with curiosity and a sense of fun, they will be ready for what life has to offer them who are confident.
To conclude with, despite the advantages I agree with given statement. We will have to be careful that we do not produce communities with social problems caused by people feeling isolated.
- The charts below show UK and USA energy consumption in 2000 and 2006.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 48
- Nowadays more people are choosing to live with their friends or alone rather than with their families this trend is likely to have a negative impact on community To what extent do you agree or disagree 79
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, as to, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87096774194 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63957179036 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608870967742 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4908654847 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.8 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354212750852 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135628210706 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811642179976 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191568184408 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564024372116 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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