In the present scenario, a significant number of tasks are completed with the help of machines. I am of the opinion that it is a positive development and the relevant reasons of this will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, the first and foremost reason is the availability of sophisticated gadgets. It is irrefutable that several electronic items are available around us at nominal prices. Due to these devices such as washing machines, microwaves, oven and many more are used to finish household chores, while printers, laptops, projectors play a vital role at workplaces to vanish the tasks within the time limit. Thus, these devices facilitate individuals to get the work done very easily.
Another clear reason is the heavy workload at homes as well as in firms. Despite having the manual skills, people enjoy to take assistance of robots in their chores because they lack of enough time to do all physical activities. Due to this fact, people tend to use robots in order to get their jobs done in less time. For example, a recent survey conducted at Oxford University revealed that over 80℅ of the work is solely finished by machines.
In my opinion, it is a positive development since robots provide countless benefits to all individuals regardless of their age. Even though these tools requires a sufficient training as well as ability to operate them, it is substantially beneficial for mankind in terms of doing jobs.
To conclude, with right assistance of these equipments majority of the operations are performed by them, which plays an extremely important part in our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...res, while printers, laptops, projectors play a vital role at workplaces to vanis...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy taking'.
Suggestion: enjoy taking
...espite having the manual skills, people enjoy to take assistance of robots in their chores be...
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Line 9, column 45, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'equipments'' or 'equipment's'?
Suggestion: equipments'; equipment's
...onclude, with right assistance of these equipments majority of the operations are performe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0671641791 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82445680594 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626865671642 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9018294781 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.461538462 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191354828824 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565172051694 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328449927587 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892679883004 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326587379943 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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