It is often argued by some that exercises play a crucial role for a better health, however, there are others who think nutrient food is extremely important. I am of the opinion that a fine diet is the best option for a sound health.
On the one hand, undoubtedly exercises provide countless benefits to the human body. In this cut-throat competition, majority of the people are becoming a part of rat-race to earn more money and to become more wealthy by working than others by working mid night or overtime.Due to this fact, their healths are becoming a prey of serious repercussions such as distress, anxiety. In order to get rid of these problems, they opt to exercise, yoga and meditation to remain healthy. With the help of these physical activities, they get a good health. Therefore, exercise plays a vital role for health.
On the other hand, a nutrient food is substantially beneficial for people too. Despite hectic schedule, some people opt a balanced diet in terms of becoming physically fir. Vegetables as well as fruits are a rich source of vitamins, proteins, carbohydrates, iron and fibre, which facilitate body to stay fit. It does not only help to reduce excessive fat from body but also enables it to fight with viral infections and diseases. For example, a recent survey conducted by an eminent dietician at Oxford University stated that over 60% of masses tend to consume salad, raw vegetables rather than other processed food.
In my opinion, a diet full of nutrients have more capabilities to keep the body fit. It gives multifarious advantages to them such as glowing skin, more energy and stamina. It also aids to fight with vitamin deficiencies.
To conclude, although exercises and balanced foods have their own benefits to body, a balanced diet is more advantageous to individuals, which provides an ample number of merits.
- Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go Write a letter to the head teacher In your letter Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what 73
- Pollution and other environmental damages are caused by a country developing and becoming richer This problem cannot be avoided To what extent do you agree 84
- International travel is becoming cheaper and more and more countries open their door and with more and more tourists Do the advantages of the increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages 84
- You live in a room in college which you share with another student However there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college In your letter describe the s 87
- Write a letter to your manager about a computer system problem that you have encountered and say Describe the problem How it is affecting your work What needs to be done about it 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Due
...others by working mid night or overtime.Due to this fact, their healths are becomin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 937.175257732 166% => OK
No of words: 312.0 206.0 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97435897436 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8285142914 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 127.690721649 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 290.88556701 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 1.44329896907 554% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1729106713 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 4.34317383033 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255034319828 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752443084691 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604684306858 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142986220614 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360214568425 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 41.2886597938 216% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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