Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you about my willingness to go on this trip.
My name is James Smith. I came to know about this short trip from my son Mathew. He specified that an educational trip is being organised by the school authorities on 30th of May to France, which will be for three days. I am very much interested to visit to this place as it is my dream country from childhood and I always wanted to be there.
I would like to mention that I have a sound experience as a tour-guide and I have read several books on its history, origin, customs and traditions. I believe it will be really beneficial for children in terms of academics. It would not only help them to get valuable information and knowledge of its origin but also assist them to get more exposure on the things such as languages, lifestyle and many more.
I have a few queries regarding this trip related to booking of tickets, overall expenses and accommodation. What belongings should students bring on this exciting excursion? I am so excited to be a part of this wonderful opportunity to go overseas.
Looking forward for your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
James Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you a...
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Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...istory, origin, customs and traditions. I believe it will be really beneficial fo...
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Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r prompt response. Yours faithfully, James Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, really, regarding, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68421052632 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75255635193 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645933014354 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.645712399 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3076923077 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173342548654 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544558082913 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524763649368 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969338734995 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686229160196 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.