University is the predominant institution to cultivate the employees for companies. Thus, the curriculum set in the university directly impact if the students are suitable for a particular job and can accomplish the job well. Some people deem that more professional and vocational skills should be taught in campus which should substitute the academic study. As far as I’m concerned, the academic study should maintain the dominant position in the curriculum, but vocational skills could occupied more parts accordingly.
Initially, we ought to acknowledge that the academic is essential and significant for everyone, especially for those who want to become the engineer. The expertise taught in the academic class like maths and physics is the foundation of many career including architecture, program, etc. Except the professional knowledge needed in the workplace, the academic also can train our thought which influence the method we solve the problems. Math can make our thoughts more logical and history can be a reference when we confront with some similar problems which have happened in the past.
However, only master the academic knowledge is not adequate for some jobs. When choosing the suitable employees for job like managers which request more experience rather than the knowledge, the companies prefer to select those who have job experience or the job training, which means if there are more vocational skills taught in campus, the students will be more competitive than peer.
In conclusion, both academic and vocational courses are inevitable for students. Such courses can pave a way for students. Thus, the university should keep providing academic study and at the same time set more vocational skills courses.
- Some people say job satisfaction is more important than job security, othersthink people cannot always enjoy their jobs. So, having a permanent job ismore important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 78
- Nowadays most people learn academic study in university, but others think we should encourage to learn vocational skills more, do you agree of disagree? 73
- Some people think children can learn effectively by watching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV at both home and school. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 494, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'occupy'
Suggestion: occupy
...curriculum, but vocational skills could occupied more parts accordingly. Initially, ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, so, thus, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45756457565 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83712249208 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542435424354 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.936616937 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.769230769 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19245354908 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761688848388 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740853134786 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130068135604 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466519821864 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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